Sunday, September 23, 2007

Serene

'Arun, drop me at the koil please.'

' Ma, Isn't God everywhere? Then why do you go to temples? '


'I am not goin to get into this arguement with you.'

'That is because you do not have a good enough reason. '

' Oh, is that what you think? Look, more often than not, temples are places where people leave negative thoughts out when they walk in. So the entire place is filled with positive vibrations. I feel happy when I go there.'

' Well, I cannot argue with that. As long as you do not tell me that you go there to earn religious currency, it is fine with me. If you do it to make yourself happy, thats good. '

' Good. That closes this topic. Now drop me at the temple. '
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Arun was reversing his car after dropping his mother, when he saw her parking her scooty. He just could not take his eyes off her. A sense of calm prevailed on her face.
She was in a hurry. She was buying 'archanai thattu', setting her hair after removing her helmet, answering a call on the cell and removing her slippers all at the same time. Yet, she seemed so much in control. Grace. Yes, that is the word. There was grace in all her movements.

Arun, parked the car and followed her into the temple. He caught her skipping as she washed her legs and walked through the hot parankallu to enter the sannidhi. A small token thoppukaranam later, she scampered into a small hall in the side of the temple.

Arun,entered the hall to find himself in the middle of a lecture,where a Swamiji was talking to the gathering which was predominantly grey and white-haired. As Arun turned to leave, the Swamiji paused and said, 'It is nice to see even the younger generation interested in our scriptures.' Arun turned back towards the hall, only to be greeted by over fifty pairs of eyes. He gave a sheepish grin and quickly seated himself on the nearest chair.
For the next 10 minutes Arun eyes scanned the hall for a her but could not spot her. The lecture ended and he was about to leave when he saw her at the other end of the room.

' Arun, what a surprise seeing you here.'

' Well, Ma, I was curious.'

'So, how did you find the lecture?'
' Well.. uh... hmm.... interesting, if I may say that.' Arun was desperately tryin to remember something from the lecture.
' Good. I am happy you liked it. '
---*--
'Ma, you are late. Let us go. '
' I am surprised Arun. I thought your interest would die down after the first lecture. But its been four weeks now and you are regular. '

'I have a question for you. After we die, depending on our karma and dharma, our souls either get moksha or there is reincarnation in some form right? '

'Well... I guess so. '

' Then, why do we regularly pray for the souls of our ancestors through various rituals when technically, their souls don't exist as their souls any more?'
'Hmm.. good question. Why don't you ask swamiji today? '

' Maybe I will. '
' I like this though. You are asking questions and you now seek to understand. This, even Arun had noticed.

Arun had seen the girl every week for the past four weeks. She must also be the philosophical kind. Today , he would speak to her.
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'Today we shall talk about detached- attachment.' Swamiji's voice filled the hall.

Maybe she is late. The traffic is heavy today.

She never came.
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' Swamiji.. Swamiji..'

' Oh sorry, my child, what were you asking again? '

The disciple looked up at Sri Arun, who looked serene in his white flowing robes.
' How did you know that this was your path in life? Did you have an inspiration or a divine revelation?'
Sri Arun closed his eyes, took a deep breath, opened his eyes and replied, 'Inspiration and indication can come from unknown sources. Strange are the ways of the lord.'


11 comments:

Karthik/SK/wimpy/SKimpy said...

you know what the first part reminded me of? the part where he sees the woomaan and then follows her in and around the temple?

Sivaji!

anyways, why do all your stories have a sad ending? or is it just a reflection of life?

lucky said...

wimpy:
Sivaji was after 3-4 years after my college life .. so well.. :P

About sad ending, I do not set my mind to writing sad stories. But yes, am aware of the constant theme in the posts.

And hey, I might have a slightly routine life now.. but the posts are no reflection of life :) Life is on a high... especially after last nite 20-20.

musafir said...

Hmmm is it just me or is the ending hilarious?

All right, all right, nice post ... would be nice if you made the dialogues sound a little more conversational though :) - "can't", "don't", "I'm" etc

Horsie said...

OUCH!!! why, why?
as aamir famously said, train, bus aur ladki ke peeche nahi rone ka!! ek gayi doosri aayegi!!

lucky said...

Musafir:
Thanks for comment. Actually I was intentionally avoiding ' can't, don't' etc.. but now I don't remember why :)
But next time I'll remember.

Horsie:
Agreer on that.

A thought: Arun needn't have become a 'swamiji' because she did not turn up. It could just be the influence of the lectures which he started attending 'coz of her. It is not necessarily always guy is the loser :)

unpredictable said...

I love this one ... like i told u .. itll take a lil more than the ordinary person to appreciate it .. and someone quite extraordinary to be able to write it 1st principle ... how did payasam turn out btw?

lucky said...

unpred:
you are a lil' too generous :)
Payasam was slurpp :P thanks.

Anonymous said...

Like I mentioned..
Loved the ending..:)

Anonymous said...

good shyte good shyte! nice writing buggah.....i like these stories, and i wont necessarily consider them sad....hilarious rather :)

Almost like an indian dahl story type!

Swetha Krishnan said...

Nice writing style! Appreciate your comment on my blog and couldn't resist reading through your articles :-)
I think more than the story itself, the narration is what makes it so interesting! Good going!!!

lucky said...

Tn : glad you liked it. Thanks. Anon: thanks mate shweta: thanks for the comment. Thanks for dropping by.