Setting sun
He lay on his bed, staring at the ceiling. She walked in to the room, naked, and slid under the sheets. As she re-emerged from underneath the sheets, next to him, her fingers traced the contours of his body . His body involuntarily responded to the new sensation. She kissed him on his lips and looked into his eyes. He pulled her close into a passionate embrace. He closed his eyes and he could still see her naked. But there was no lust.
They made out till the sheets were drenched in sweat and both stopped due to sheer exhaustion than anything else.They lay, starring at each other, lost. She got up, got dressed and opened the curtains. The setting sun filled the sky with Orangish - red. The light flooded the room. It seemed to be completing the moods and the smells in the room.
She walked up to him and they held each other tightly almost clinging to each other. She then turned and walked towards the door. She opened the door, paused for a second and looked back at him. He looked at her and said , ' I will not be able to attend your wedding tomorrow.'
5 comments:
are are!
considering you're just back from a wedding i'm wondering what gave you such ideas!
He hee - why cant the sun set quietly - without doing such things :D :D
SK-
the post was written before the 'wedding' :)
Anon: If such things diddnt happen, would you want the sun to set? Ever?
thanks for stopping by.
"They made out till the sheets were drenched in sweat "
Bwahahaha! u destroyed the setting that u were nicely creating :PP
whats the jedi significance anyway? arbit story writing?
~gv
' I will not be able to attend your wedding tomorrow.'
Can be replaced by " You forgot to collect the money"...Hey no offense meant here just an other alternate interesting ending thats all :)
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